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reaper of men
Posts : 23
Join date : 2011-05-28
| | Subject: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 5:44 pm | |
| Name: Shikamaru Tonamori Age:14 Personality:He is funny. He is smart. He is very cautious. He strategises well thought out plans in battle. He likes pandas and mochi. He dislikes Harley riders and clowns. He is very calm and acts the same way in battle. He is always forgiving. He is not hard to make laugh. He also likes owls. Appearance:  [/url] Height:5ft 9in Weight:140 pounds Flame:rain flame Family/Organization:Varia rain gaurdian Role:varia rain gaurdian History: Grew up in a big mansion with a lot of butlers. He joined the mafia because another family killed all off his butlers and he doesnt like to work. He forgave the family that killed the butlers but stayed in tha mafia. He never has once visited the graves of his butlers. When he first joined the mafia, he found out he was third genaration. He murdered another rain gaurdian of another family to prove his rank. His best friend in the family is echo. Who got him to join the Varia. ring: varia rain ring Boxes/Box Rings: N/A Equipment: N/A Weapon(s): Scythe and Sickle Techniques: Will learn
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RetroWalk
Posts : 178
Join date : 2011-05-15
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 5:47 pm | |
| add on to history a bit and make custom weapons for sickle and scythe | |
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RetroWalk
Posts : 178
Join date : 2011-05-15
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 6:24 pm | |
| APPROVED but he is XV gen | |
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Admin Vongola
Admin
Posts : 161
Join date : 2011-05-15
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 7:02 pm | |
| REJECTED
ur history makes no sense. u sya he killed another guardian and then u say he joins mafia.doesnt make sense. also make the weapon in the correct format and you are fifteenth gen not third. fix it all and no matter what my brother says it isnt approved yet | |
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Mana-kun
Posts : 150
Join date : 2011-05-21
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 7:04 pm | |
| actually admin, it makes plenty of sense. You can murder someone then become a mafia member, it makes perfect sense to me. | |
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RetroWalk
Posts : 178
Join date : 2011-05-15
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 7:05 pm | |
| it is approved he just cant use his weapons in the rp til fixed and it is just a jumbled history k. He is a noob let it pass geez
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Admin Vongola
Admin
Posts : 161
Join date : 2011-05-15
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 7:07 pm | |
| he says he murdered ANOTHER guardian to prove his worth and then became a guardian. And prove his worth to who.......the mafia obviously. It doesnt make sense. Also make him weigh more, there is NO way that a 5'9" 14 year old weighs 120 lbs. | |
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Thor
Posts : 70
Join date : 2011-05-16
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 8:31 pm | |
| Personality is also iffy, do not make he is statments, try describing it more | |
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Admin Vongola
Admin
Posts : 161
Join date : 2011-05-15
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: character creation Sat May 28, 2011 8:33 pm | |
| my god he i s fifteenth gen not third! fix it please! | |
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